Day 22 of NaPoWriMo explores proverbs from different cultures. This prompt was fun and stretched me some. If you want to spend a little while today exploring how other culture’s proverbs cryptically and eliptically convey certain home truths, then do visit the link that is at the bottom of the quote explaining today’s prompt. What really fascinated me was how geographical near neighbours could have a very similar allusion, but have subtle differences in meaning. Compare and contrast the Armenian “Stop ironing my head.” (i.e. stop anoying me) with the Turkish “Don’t iron my head!” (i.e. don’t go on and on about it!). One implies an active command and lets you know how unhappy they are with you, while the other feels more passive, like a plea to just stop talking over and over about a topic, like your granny who keeps repeating the same story.)
Our (optional) prompt for the day asks you to engage with different languages and cultures through the lens of proverbs and idiomatic phrases. Many different cultures have proverbs or phrases that have largely the same meaning, but are expressed in different ways. For example, in English we say “his bark is worse than his bite,” but the same idea in Spanish would be stated as “the lion isn’t as fierce as his painting.” Today, I’d like to challenge you to find an idiomatic phrase from a different language or culture, and use it as the jumping-off point for your poem. Here’s are a few lists to help get you started: One, two, three.http://www.napowrimo.net/
The poem I finally wrote is a mash up of three different culture’s turns of phrase – Hebrew, Ukrainian, and Estonian.
At the End of the World
It’s generally a good rule of thumb
if not a finally tuned tool for navigation.
You’ll find my cottage is at the edge,
one and half country miles from
The lights are on but no one’s home.
The door’s open. Give the dog a bone.
Feed a coin to the meter.
You’re very welcome.
Turn right to find your way back
from the edge of the end of the world.
Copyright © Bee Smith, 2020. All rights reserved.
I have been on a bit of a digital break over the holidays, but here we are with the first Sunday Weekly poem of a new year and a new decade. I fully intended to do a 2019 reflection on 30th December, but as it happens I became fully engaged in baking for an alcohol-free New Year’s gathering with friends instead. The days slipped by and then Sunday morning rolled around and I needed to write the weekly poem. This is not to say that I did not write over that week, because I did, but that is material that has been submitted to an anthology of women’s writing with the working title Bloody Amazing!
No sooner than the New Year’s decorations were taken down, I looked onto social media and I find words like Armageddon and apocolypse being bandied about. Immediately, (I am not lying) Archbald MacLeish’s sonnet The End of the World came to mind. Macleish lived through World War I, served with the precursor of the CIA in World War II, saw the Cold War and atomic bomb threat, and wound up his days in the Library of Congress. According to the text book anthology I used in college, The End of the World was published in 1926.
While perusing some the the decade reflections in print media I noticed that 2016 is considered the worst year in the 2010-2019 decade. Yet, it was the happiest for me as I married my long-time love that year. (Though at the time some friends did say it was the anticipated happy moment that was keeping them going and reason to get out of bed in the morning.) Anne Lamott echoes this observation in a book I got for Christmas, Almost Everything. (Canongate, 2019). This quotation in the Prelude inspired today’s Sunday Weekly poem. As did Dickens in Tale of Two Cities when he observes that it was both the best and worst of times.
Love is why we have hope.Anne Lamott, Almost Everything: Notes on Hope
The Day the World Ends
Love is what opens eyes to a new day
even by lunchtime you will metaphorically and
literally be standing in a pile of poop and
are cursing the thoughtless owner
of some beloved dog who eyes that human
with unconditional regard.
Who is pawing and cajoling the beloved
to just get up one more day. Even if
it may be the End of the World today.
Have you seen that internet meme
of the rescued kangaroo hugging and clinging
to its human saviour? Love, it seems,
will always be there in the fray.
Remember that couple leaping from
the inferno tower, hand in hand, on 9/11?
Or all those last phone messages left , every one
saying I love you and Hug the kids.
Hold each other on days when you are not
beloved. When the one you loved is lost forever,
has turned its back or gone on without you.
On that bleakest of death knell days,
go! Reach past the fire and flood threatening
to engulf and obliterate, because
even on the day that is the day that is
the End of the World, you will open your eyes,
stretch your hands and arms and arise
the miracle of yourself who loves and
can be loved in return and today may be that day.
And that shall never be obliterated by
false moves, mistakes, flood or wildfire burn.
Copyright © Bee Smith 2020. All rights reserved.
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